For those of you who didn’t tune in last week, Deana Barnhart is hosting an awesome blogfest this month. And this week’s challenge is we’re all building a story together. If you’d like to read the story from the start, visit Nata. However, I’m taking my cues from the
link right before mine.
On top of continuing the story, I’ve been tasked with writing an action scene and including the words: awesome, dress, flake.
So…here goes ^_^
“…bike. Not one of those pussy bikes you see chugging down a suburban street, but an awesome hog with a massive engine.” Roddern shoved his hands in his pockets, surveying their surroundings as if such a thing would just appear.
Dio pursed her lips. “You men … it’s all about food, and size with you, isn’t it? Fine.” She closed her eyes and took a deep breath, and a loud roar sounded outside their tiny cell. Whoever thought it would be funny to grant her the power to do whatever she wanted, as long as it didn’t impact her directly, wasn’t as funny as they thought.
“Wicked.” Roddern grinned. A chain appeared in his hand, and then vanished again, followed by a clang outside the car. The bike engine revved and tires squealed. Though she couldn’t see it, Dio wondered if she’d overdone it on the motorcycle as the car lurched, spinning out of control.
Dio screamed, fists hammering at the trunk, the vibrations making the gut wrenching ride even worse until the ride ended with the sound of crunching metal on wood. She climbed out, wincing as the tree that had stopped them rained flakes of wood onto her dress. She opened her mouth to speak, her eyes growing wide in horror when she saw something just behind Roddern.
Check out the next lucky participant, picking up where I left off.
Wow. That was a great action scene and a great lead in for the next writer.
Men do always think about–food. Nice action scene:)
That was intense! I’m biting my nails in anticipation:)
lol – thanks all. I only read the bit right before mine when I wrote, and going back and reading it all makes it just silly. But this is so much fun ^_^
Love the Harley! Can’t wait to see where it roars to next!
Whoa, great action scene! And what-oh-what is behind Roddern?!
The chain broke right after you, so you might want to change your link so people don’t get lost.
Great cliffhanger. 🙂
Great action scene. I can’t wait to see what happens next!
Whooo… How exciting! I can’t wait to see where we go from here.
Love the action here! I like the suspense at the end.
Did the I could best considering the chain got broken thank GOD you made it easy!
Must have been pretty crowded in that trunk! lol
The big bike in the trunk is interesting…
That must be a huge trunk 😉 Another awesome cliffhanger ending.